TEMPLATE #3 OF 111TrustStory

The expensive lesson Template

A number in the first line buys attention, and admitting the cost buys trust.

Goal: Trust
Format: Story
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Specific costLessonThe decisionThe thing you could not see yetPoint in timeHow it went wrong, concretelyCheck you would runThing you would askLine you would not crossCost

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[Specific cost: "£14,000", "Six months", "Two clients"].

That is what it cost me to learn [lesson].▲ Hook sits above the fold (~210 chars)▼ Below expands on “...see more”
The decision looked obvious at the time: [the decision].

What I missed: [the thing you could not see yet].

By [point in time], [how it went wrong, concretely].

What I would do differently:
1. [check you would run]
2. [thing you would ask]
3. [line you would not cross]

The lesson cost [cost]. It is yours for free.

What is the most expensive lesson you have paid for?

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Template Playbook

How to write a killer The expensive lesson post

Designed to demonstrate deep domain competence, authenticity, and empathy so lurkers convert to followers.

✓ What works on LinkedIn

Start in media res (right in the action) with a concrete anchor: number, date, or cost
Show what was at stake so readers feel the emotional weight
Extract one universal lesson the reader can apply to their own work today
Keep paragraphs short (1–2 sentences) for comfortable mobile reading

✕ Mistakes to avoid

Do not humblebrag or disguise a sales pitch as vulnerability
Do not write a diary entry without an actionable takeaway for the reader
Do not use melodrama or artificial cliffhangers
Do not hide the actual numbers or costs if you teased them in the hook

When to use this template

When you want to build deep personal trust and empathy with prospects
After an expensive mistake, rejection, or hard-won breakthrough
When illustrating a common client problem through real dialogue
To humanize your personal brand and show the messy reality behind the wins

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